I was looking for a solution to the mystery, like a bizarre disease or even plain ’ol dwarfism, instead this turned into the sad, unsatisfying tale of an unusually short man. There was no closure, for me at least, no wrap up, and it makes me uneasy.

Once again, brevity strikes! He’s not supposed to be short, he just ages twice as slowly. Hence developmental milestones such as his voice dropping occurring when he was 30 instead of 15. Also the title. Wonder what I could change to make this more clear.

I think I prefer ElshaHawk’s interpretation of events to yours, lastsyllable. A sad and uneasy man.

I figured he aged slowly when his voice dropped at thirty… and the title.