Very dark and mysterious entry. I like the possibilities in this one. Had a very ‘old legend’ feel.

Ooh…leaves me puzzling out your personality. It’s mysterious certainly and almost a little haunting.

Lovely description and good job on telling a tale within it. (3rd para)

Well done.
Abby
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This reads like a fable. I feel like I should have learned a lesson but I liked it. I always enjoy a story within a story.