Wow I adored this! The idea that she might slowly transform this new image’s identity back to her own… whilst losing her own soul… is just amazingly clever.
I love how you’ve written this, it all feels just perfect for the the character and setting. This story has incredible potential, and I look forward to seeing more of this Faust-y femme fatale :P

(on a technical note that “y” in “you not finish” needs a capital)

fixed! and thanks for the great comment!

You would make a chinese nail salonist not talk proper English.

Yeah i got a little stereotypical, but around here, that’s who does the nails!

Very nice. Have to agree with pretty much everything Tsu said. I have lots of questions (which I take to be a good sign): how long does the transformation take, what about the demons needs/wants, does fulfilling them slow or speed the transformation, etc, etc.

Interesting how he is able to get into her head already. She may be lost.

I want to hear more!

amazingly well-written. :]

nicely done … good continuation as ever.
good work,
Abby x

Nice installment. I like the attention paid to the pros and cons and the plans to make it be okay eventually.