This is one of your best. E-e-e-even though Jewish children weren’t kept to work, I can ignore the inaccuracy because it was just so well written. The second last sentence is powerful, because it reveals so much about the girl’s situation.
Hmm… Yes, but they didn’t work at death camps. They were ushered into big buildings and told to take a shower, but the water was a poison. As far as I know only people who were ‘eighteen’ were made to work instead of killed.