Oh wow…this is intense!

‘Moments of melodrama’ was right. Nicely written, though perhaps a touch on the over-done side…something I do often enough. Great installment.

Agreed that this was a nice continuation, if a bit over the top. But then, these kinds of spy stories always are.

Quite a shift from Madame Butterfly to Wagner, though. (Speaking of which, you need to put an “e” on the end of the first word in that title. Or an “a” if you want to go with the original title.)

I also agree with the ott impression, although perhaps not as stronly as the others. Well written…
Abby x

The third paragraph here is my favourite, “sink” links to “skin” (same letters) and “liquid lapping” increases the impact of “lust”.