This is an interesting premise, but the first paragraph was a little bit stilted. I’d like to have a little more background on the story, though it does work alright as it is…this is good, but I feel like you could do better =]

I like how this view on the end of the world had a bit of humor to it instead of it being all doom and gloom. The ending made me laugh :)

Thank you. :]

I will work on that next time someday_93! :]