Ohh this is me three years ago. Brill insight.

I’d never expect Liz to be so depressed.

I didn’t realize you had a time machine. How else would you have been able to capture the essence of my life circa middle school?

Hmm, I didn’t expect her to be depressed either…this is amazingly perfect.

wow. Hoopearing girl torn apart inside. This is very well written. I love how this challenge is going

This is one of my favorites in this challenge— I really like how you flesh out the character. Nice work!

Sounds soo familiar. Nicely done. Good character!
Abby x