Ah, I see,… the pen is mightier than the sword. Awesome :)

Cute. I really should have seen that coming, especially here on ficly. Nicely done.

Crafty. Got so into the description that I didn’t see the big finish coming.

This one caught me by surprise too. Nicely done! You need to change all of your usages of “it’s” to “its” except for the ones in the sixth paragraph. The former is a contraction of “it is.” The latter is the possessive you want.

Haha, I wrote mine before reading any of the others, and now realize that we had similar ideas. Though in execution they’re fairly different. The idea has been around for a while, so it’s no wonder that two would think alike.

Nice twist at the end. I like the high drama leading into the twist. I’m expecting Conan the Barbarian and instead get Conan O’Brien.

Smithy should not be capitilized in the second sentence. It’s not a proper noun.

Did it occur to you that I might have capitalised it for effect? That I used the S instead of s as he is the most important character in this dialogue? Did it? DID IT?!?

So, YOUR A CHAMPION.

YAY! I WON ONE! I FINNALLY WON A CHALLENGE!

Remove ‘Pen’ from the tags, please.

Done. And why?

If someone reads the tags before the entry, then it can ruin the ending. My entry probably falls prey to the same problem.