Aww. the fickleness of youth. Nice insight into the characters.
Few edits you might want to make. “I had [s]kill [and] [a]bility and my friends, Ben, Randy and Tim.” The two separate sentences is pointless. “I was the was the talent of the class; I could ride a skateboard, and play the guitar and drums.” Youtube should be capitalized.
Few edits you might want to make.
“I had [s]kill [and] [a]bility and my friends, Ben, Randy and Tim.”
The two separate sentences is pointless.
“I was the was the talent of the class; I could ride a skateboard, and play the guitar and drums.”
Youtube should be capitalized.
Cheers for the tips. I often write a story then find I’ve added too many capitals or other such errors as youve pointed out.
I love the complicated love triangles in the class!
I really like the detail about the hits on YouTube. Good addition!
Oh dear…I like the almost analytical process of deciding who to ask out. This is a cute one =]
great job. This gives me so much hope for the next challenge!
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