Comments on Desk #10: Maria Yzecka by LMR

Wednesday [PJ] ((LoA))

EWWWWWW!!!
But nice.
Poor Boobins don’t know what he’s got comin to him
- Posted almost 10 years ago.
Mr.Gabriel

Yummy. Teacher/student relationship. Great twist.
- Posted almost 10 years ago.
- 4 out of 5
H.S. Wift

Is it wrong that I know this person, except it’s a dude? Bearing in mind I’m still talking about a guy teacher.
- Posted almost 10 years ago.
- 4 out of 5
Ruby Slippers

This is great! I love the twist and the suggestiveness of the third paragraph is well done.
- Posted almost 10 years ago.
someday_93

Ooh, a sketchy girl. I was wondering when someone would write about a troublemaker!
- Posted almost 10 years ago.
LMR

Thanks for all of the comments! I’m getting all fluttery inside!

@H.S. Wift: It’s not wrong that you know this guy! I have known many a person who lusted after their teacher/professor.
- Posted almost 10 years ago.
Nathaniel Payne

Wow. Wonderfully told. Wickedly written. :)
- Posted almost 10 years ago.
- 5 out of 5
Gradual Uprising {LoA}

Taking this challenge to another level. NICE!
- Posted almost 10 years ago.
H.S. Wift

I agree, LMR. Homosexual lusts are very common nowadays, and we should all get used to the fact that they are here and queer.
- Posted almost 10 years ago.
- 4 out of 5
Gradual Uprising {LoA}

LMR! Congrats. You will win this challenge when it ends. Which means that YOU get to write the Mr. Dobbins story. It has the same requirements as the other stories. Take us through the class period from his perspective.

Good Luck :)
- Posted almost 10 years ago.
LMR

Thanks, Gradual Uprising! I’ll do my best!
- Posted almost 10 years ago.
THX 0477

Oooh, danger. Makes me think of that song by the Police, ’Don’t Stand So Close to Me.’ Nicely written from her perspective.
- Posted almost 10 years ago.