In the second paragraph, you switch from past tense, to present tense and back to past tense. This is jarring to the reader (or at least it was to me) Suggest changing “still isn’t used” to “still wasn’t used” to keep it all in the past tense.
In the second paragraph, you switch from past tense, to present tense and back to past tense. This is jarring to the reader (or at least it was to me)
Suggest changing “still isn’t used” to “still wasn’t used” to keep it all in the past tense.
Raymond Finn