I loved it, a wonderful piece of fiction. i noticed only one typo and that was that I think you meant tp put “Joey, is she here yet?”

Thanks! I feel so stupid when I make typos like that.

Wicked, literally. Warlocks and assassins.
After ‘Melinda, at least’ it should be a full stop, not a comma. But that’s just me nit-picking…
But still it’s perfectly fantastical.

Some neat ideas and descriptions, but it all comes so quickly that it’s hard to get a bearing on anything. And I have to dock you points for apparently having some basis in Charmed, the worst acted TV show in history.

Oh my God, THX. You just lost all awesome points. You are officially, like, not cool.