Jared is me plus the pot minus the neurotic personality and sarcasm.
And he plays bass, rock on!
I love how the characters are beginning to squeeze out. This’ll probably end up having 56 billion sequels and will become an actual novel. im excited :)

Thanks! It will have a LOT of sequels, and is already becoming a novel. These past 6 stories are kind of the first and second chapters, just expanded!

This is really cool! I also hope to see more.

Just a thought – on the third paragraph, you have a period and a comma after the dialog. You should pick just one, and it should go inside the quotes.

This is really cool! I also hope to see more.

Just a thought – on the third paragraph, you have a period and a comma after the dialog. You should pick just one, and it should go inside the quotes.

You have some great characterization on Jared here. I thought they had other songs to practice? oh well, they can play whatever they want. :)

Another good band though the misfits scare me a lot, especially the one with the skeleton face. I also like how you’re developing the characters now.

Uh. Not really a band freak, so I can’t comment on any of that, but I’m awaiting the drama.