small notes: careful with ur dialogs, it got a bit confusing at “Do what?” I sighed, i envision her sighing “Do what?” But i know ur going for a sighing after his question.
small notes:
careful with ur dialogs, it got a bit confusing at “Do what?” I sighed, i envision her sighing “Do what?” But i know ur going for a sighing after his question.
Gradual Uprising {LoA}