Nice! I think you nailed the characterizations, but I was hoping you’d give me more of an idea why there were there. You know, so that if I can think of a good sequel, I wouldn’t have to come up with it myself…

This is a very well done sequel. While you haven’t given much of the story away, you’ve expanded on the characters and given just a small hint of the experience. The lack of information, more than anything, I think is what makes this so brilliant.

I’m not sure I understand the tags though. I kind of get obsequious, but phrenology?

I couldn’t make heads or tails of Eckhouse’s tags on the original, so I added a random tag or two to mine. Just being quirky.

Hmm, well, I was hoping to find out more about what was going on, but I really liked this, you fit the voice of the previous piece perfectly.