A nice direct form of commenting, with grim subject matter. It does seem a little like a general address though, as if to the public not to one specific person. You manage to get across the point of view well, a very twisted justification. I don’t think you need ’I’ve left…pick it up’, for me it spoils the flow a bit. On a technical note you need to capitalise your ‘you’ in the third paragraph. ‘See you all in Hell’ was a nice touch, nudging into cliche but it fits the feel.

Thanks for your comments. Will get to editing.

My earlier comment reads more critical than I intended. I meant to also say I really like this story, and I think you’re rather brave for choosing this character. Well done!

That’s okay! I need criticism as well.

Very wow! Wow isn’t even and adj. But it deserves it. Like to know more bout this serial killer. Prequel?

Feel free =P

I think it had a vaguely “Jack the Ripper” element too it. Obviously, with the reference to Television, it’s not supposed to be. But it had that air about it.

I enjoyed the rather cold blooded way your character spoke to us. She is both cold and in a way passionate. Well done.