I knew a guy named Pally, he was a dick.
I can relate to this tale.

I also think the sci-fi/fantasy combo is a good idea (presence of alien). Throw in more sci-fi and you could have something very interesting methinks.

This is the autobiography of my WoW character; Hawkswift. Look up WoW and you’ll find that Blizzard decided to make a spaceship crash into the fantasy world and then a portal is opened to the alien home world which is full of demons and orcs. Good game. Not so much on the realistic side.

Some fun and exciting stuff here, but you’ve told it so quickly much of the context and setting is lost. Feels a bit flat is all, just cause it is so quickly related. A few typos too, like ‘steeped’ and ‘plays’ instead of ‘played’.