you tell me where elsha and might joe have been these past few days. haha

Of course Elsha would be in this! :P

Haha, this is pretty funny. Elsha’s power was out for a few days, but it’s back on now.

I think the ’he’s’ and ’she’s’ in here got a little confused for me, I wasn’t sure who was doing what for a while, but the general style was good, and the reveal at the end was a little terrifying – I don’t know what we’d do without Elsha, and of course MJY is still sorely missed…

But anyhoo, good work! MH :)

so true. i re-read it and i myself got a bit lost in my personal pronouns. I don’t feel like editing it now, maybe in the near future.