Comments on The Weight of the World is on My Shoulders by Emmyful

Catherine

You just described exactly how I’m feeling at the moment. This was perfect. The 7th stanza was my favorite but I loved this whole thing.
- Posted almost 10 years ago.
- 5 out of 5
Wednesday [PJ] ((LoA))

Wow. And I don’t normally like poetry.
I love the patterns and the emotions that come out. Just beautiful..
- Posted almost 10 years ago.
Emmyful

Catherine…I’m glad to know I’m not the only one. I was having such an off day yesterday that I even typed ‘ficlets.com’ into the address bar instead of ficly. Ugh.

PJ…Thank you so much! Ironically, I don’t like poetry much either. I can write it, but I have trouble reading it.
- Posted almost 10 years ago.
Gurth

If I may paraphrase Abel Sanchez, I would warn you:
“Si te haces como miel, las moscas te comerAn.”
You are too unselfish! Balance is needed, otherwise the game is not fair.
Your writing is flawless and moving.
- Posted almost 10 years ago.
- 5 out of 5