Style is pretty good. Unaffected, unpretentious, clear, easy to read, poetically acceptable (not rhythmically jarring, or cacophonous). rate 4.6
Content interesting, thought-provoking, a bit obscure technically which is not a bad thing.. rate 4.1

way to be technical gurth.

I rate it a 4.14967598.
for reasons unbeknownst to me. Haha.

Very thought provoking! but struck me as kind of Matrix-like.

Well I think this story is a 5.000000007
I agree with the above comments this really made me think especially the couple of lines.

Very Good!

This was interesting to read and met the challenge nicely. I agree with Grad, it did make me think of The Matrix but the last couple of lines were great.

I love this, it’s great, so I will officially give you a 9/5. I will technically give you a 3.14159265. Yes. I know Pi.

Well, I will give it a 5.55555555555555!

This reminds me of a Star Trek episode.

I like.

This fits the challenge well. And I like sci-fi. Soooo…. 5.1!

Love it. Very fun read and good irony at the end.

You could eliminate everything except the last paragraph, and this would still be interesting and thought-provoking.

I finally ask you if I can steal this story’s concept, now that the story I wrote by its theft has been featured and won a challenge.