Nice entry although there are a few things: -firstly I dont think you need brackets, and not just cos they annoy me if they aren’t some kind of sidenote. You should just say the humans in their tall glass cities -this may just be me but i dont think we need to know the exact size of the group of trees =P
other than that i really like where this is going plus you used the word spectre which gives you awesome points. sequel? thanks for entering
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Raymond Finn