Still not much has been revealed, but this little triplet of stories has atmosphere in spades. Nothing feels rushed, it’s simply unfolding in front of us.

I feel that Peter’s sudden urge to empty his bladder somewhat takes away from the prequel. In the prequel, Peter (almost) pissed his pants out of fear. Here you’ve moved it to a simple need to urinate, or a possible medical condition wherein he forgot to take his FloMax™ this morning.

Overall, it’s a great scene, and I love the description of “flowers on fire.”

Yep, still quiet, slow development of the story, but I like all the little details we are getting. Cool addition. I’ll try to keep things going.

“So it was to his great relief” ha. no pun intended I presume.lol