This is kind of “bad-ass” and sweet at the same time. I liked it.

Leaves a lot open for continuation. But maybe put an end quote at the end?

First off, Welcome to Ficly.

Someday is correct, you do need an end quote. Although this is a good beginning for character bio in an RPG, it does lack some depth (ie sequels needed)

Thanks for the comments! I’ve added the end quote :)