Oh no…I wonder what made her go deaf.

Wow! I really felt the desperation in this one. I imagined being sam and hearing the blasting tv and screaming (loved one?) it’s possible. But even more frightening from the other view point. Well Done

I think the way it’s written, broken up like that, really adds to the panic, desperation and overall ‘silence’ of the story.

Hard to describe i guess.

Oh yeah, it was a really enjoyable read too.

high 5.

this is brilliantly written. well done, seriously. :]

Excellent tragedy, sorry for not getting to it sooner. Ficly’s RSS isn’t great. Thanks for entering!

This is really powerful. I had no idea what was going on at first, but then it all made sense towards the middle. It’s a beautiful piece.

Pretty well written and impacting, but it has a few cliches in it, like, “However my heart had yet to accept it.” It interrupts the relatable voice with something a little too formal, a little too detached. Detached works, but if its detached, you have to be detached the whole time for it to be effective.

Hope I got what I wanted to say across (more importantly, hope it was helpful). Besides that, it was a pretty good, emotional ride.

I agree with all the praise. You carried me along, worried all the time. A terrible fate