Aha! Very first prequel to one of my stories! It is an honor.

It captures the essence of the impatient fighter I was going for, I’m glad how that turned out.

Only criticism would be that there are spellings errors here and there but thats it…

Another thing, this isn’t a criticism, just a thought. I wonder what happened to the thief and mage in the ensuing combat/trap? Perhaps their absence can be explained in a sequel? I think I have to write one now…

Your premise was too much fun to leave prequelless.

I can’t for the life of me find the spelling errors.

Since all the combat in the original concentrates on the 9now dead) fighter, plenty of room for the other two in the sequel.

This was fun.

Warrior in the third paragraph.
Burglar in the second.
Junior in the sixth.

And I agree… It will probably start with them standing at the doorway in shock, exasperation and possibly a little relief.

Thanks.

Writer’s eyes I guess. :)