Awe SO MUCH Better. i read the rest of your pieces, but decided not to comment. I just do’t really like stories that rhyme. This feels like such a breathe of fresh air from you. I’d continue down this path.

I may not understand completely what this means, but some very powerful imagery used here.

It’s a knife taking about how some one used it to kill themselves

Wow. slipped me. But now I got the whole picture. that’s no fault of yours. (I can be a bit slow) after all it’s written clearly as the title.

Yes, well it could be just that I didn’t do a good enough job writing it. If you didn’t get it at first then it must not be written well.

Good Job mary, Altho I like your pieces that rhyme… this is really well written.. you can feel the emotion