Ben does hear you, and he is hiding something. If only Randy knew. D:

I like the irritated final words, making sure he gave an actual answer. Isn’t that what you really want to hear? Wonderful.

“Yes Randy! That’s what I wanted.” Says Mrs. Bishop.

Haha well done

Wow, this is great. I like the contrast of what he really wants to say, versus what he knows Mrs. Bishop wants to hear. Nice work!

When I was first thinking about the challenge, the same thought about their ages went through my mind as well. I really like how perceptive he is, and how in this future look at himself, you were able to give us some background on his past.

I also love the contrast, and I especially like how he thinks of 40 as ancient, like you do when you’re 14.