Aw, that was really sweet, I like how you told a story of a relationship just through a simple rock. Thanks for entering!

Aww. I read this without knowing that it was a challenge entry, and was impressed with the way you made the rock the center of the piece so seamlessly ;) Nice work!

cute :-)

This was wonderful! I loved the line whenever he needed strength he pulled a little bit of hope out of his pocket.
Did i mention how much I liked this story? :)

This is really nice. The only thing that caught my eye is that “a little bit of hope” might work better as “that little bit of hope” just to help keep the rock center place. (and it seems to flow better to me.)

Thanks CR – I wasn’t sure how to make the connection stronger.

wow! Simply loved it!
so simple and yet so..so..close to the heart :)
nice!

Girl wants guy, girl gets guy – still and always the most interesting story in the world.

Congratulations! You’re a champion!