Leaves a ton to the imagination, but in the good way.

Lots of… colorful imagery.

Thanks!

I have to give props to my friend Courtney for the idea of ‘20-dimensional shatter babies.’ No idea what they are, but I loved the imagery it evoked so I ran with it.

Best line: then they both oofed. I like the sci-fi/western genre anyway and this was a good example. You have managed to create a new monster to fight. This left me wanting more. This could easily be developed into a “proper” short story.

Thanks for the comment, Paige! I actually started this at an earlier point and got to 1K characters before anything exciting had happened, so I jumped ahead and this was the result. I agree there’s short story potential here.

Love It!