Being an avid reader of comic books, I was entertained. I wish I had powers.

Only critiques would be that I think you could maybe have broken it up a little bit? I don’t know if that’s too valid though.

Also, “good deed gone colossal backfire” sounds funny.

Oh and by the way, I demand a sequel.

thanks for the feedback. regarding that particular line, i most certainly did struggle with that a bit and agree that it sounds pretty awkward.