sweetly grotesque and just, having him arrested. :)

I’ve read parts 2 and 3 now, and I’m still not sure what the title refers to. What’s the divine intervention?

Also, “Police Henderson” ? Did you mean “Police Chief” ? Or something else?

As with Raymond I’m at a loss with the title, but you did a good idea of summing everything up here – the idea that Max’s more sinister personality has separated itself from him is particularly intriguing!

The hint of the dentistry tools was ambiguously chilling as well – a nice touch…

Good work, a clever little miniseries, though I’m almost a little disappointed that the confines of the challenge mean we can’t see any more of this character! MH :)

Haha the original drafts of this story were about an intervention of a psych patient. I haven’t changed the title, and I don’t know if I will. :)