fix this: and saw that there was a light were on inside
and the next sentence, was the door at the top of the stairs or behind them, or what? oh it was at the top.. that was confusing..
and of course michael is there, the little scoundrel, creep!

corrected.

Two sets of doors at the foot of the stairs (one leading to the loading dock, one going towards the interior of the building), one door at the top.

Scoundrel is too complimentary a word – Michael is a scumbag without a shred of human kindness. He needs to get his just rewards by the time this story ends.