I hope that this is a true story, because it’s awesome.

When I reached the second paragraph I was worried it was going to turn into a lecture, or a thought for the day rather than a story, but that ending was unexpected and well written…

Good work, despite the slightly philosophical slump in the middle – I enjoyed… MH :)

Thanks for the comment. I agree that the second paragraph slows things down, but I felt it was necessary to set up the last part, and have it all make sense. The middle part is how certain members of the public view sites like Twitter. The purpose of the story was to turn that viewpoint on its head.