I thought of using Tyler Harris from an unknown point in time so as not to fuck up the classroom etiquette series.

ok…do u want the critiques?

Yes, and I am sure there are many. I know that spanish isn’t my best language

Your best language? Do you mean you speak others? I can speak a bit of German :)
Ok, so… I get the story, if you tell it like that, the story is understood. There are some things that make it sound a bit… robotic, like if you used Google translator, but will learn and I really APPRECIATE how brave you are to write in a language that isn’t yours. If you want me to correct it, I can so that you learn a bit more! :)

Thankyou very much. I appreciate any form of constructive criticism. I speak some others. English, Spanish, a bit of french and a tiny bit of arabic. Of japanese I only know konichiwah. I can’t type the character as I lack a japanese keyboard.

I wish I knew more languages! But I don’t get interested in any… French, Italian or German don’t really interest me, European languages in general. I have to find one that makes me wanna learn it, I’m sick of german!

German seems too crude a language to learn. I like french and spanish as they flow better. Languages of more beauty than brutey.

French is beautiful, but I find it a bit corny(?)… I thought that about american accent too until I heard Grad speak! I guess is hearing it and living with it what makes you like a language. At first I enjoyed German, but 4 years later I just want to throw the dictionary away!

My sister got so sick of German, she took the first change from it. I now know that latin irritates her.

oh, I can speak Latin aswell. It’s a dead language, but I’m learning it at school. German is awful if you don’t like it.

English, Spanish, French, that’s my trifecta!

Notes:
*No literalmente. (literalmente is an adverb and you put it there like an adjective)
*morí emocionalmente
*Pero, TAMPOCO es LA realidad
*brazo
*alrededor
*pienso
*ojos para mi chica
*aceptable
*soy simpático
*lo que (sin tilde0
*Liz está
*Todo es normal

i don’t understand the phrase

El chico es Tyler Harris tambíen.

¿Qué chico? and también<—

Hispánico is an adjective…it’s like saying The Spanish. You need to say El Español

Alucino.

I wish I had track changes to correct your grammar. Perhaps, a Spanish II textbook would be useful. Por favor!

Ok, Grad Up, I made the corrections. The combination of being a typo magnet and writing in a language I don’t yet have a full understanding of makes lots of errors. With the chico – I realised I’d left out a sentence that I’d meant to put in.

Clumsy and cluttered spanish. ¿Nadie habla español por aquí? Creo que en vez de criticar es hora que yo ponga manos a la obra.

I AM spanish.

HAgalo por favor Don C.