Great. I loved it. I loved how the character changed over time.

Just a few orrections to make; I think you meant we learn from everything and of asking how your day had gone

Otherwise, perfect.

True! Thanks! :)

Awesome! Congrats on your first story!!!
typos:
everything, not everyhting
a space in between ‘aswell’→as well
Mr Philips is Mr. Philips

But very strong!!! you have a great vocabulary. perpetual silence. very well written!

Oh damn! I knew them all! That’s what happens when you write it fast and you don’t revise it… Thanks! :D

Happens to the best of us. I have made certain… errors that I’m not proud of. I didn’t spot them, wound up reading out some very… humiliating things to my class. DONT LET IT HAPPEN!

not bad for a non-native speaker! I could never do this in spanish. :) This is a great set-up for more storytelling, leaving us ask, why was she absent?

…“abscences” should be “absences” – “from class”, not “to class”.
I don’t see why I should deduct a mark. I wish some of the natives had your style.