I was going to put in a part about ho Moma Decker wanted to help her edit this and use proper grammar, but then read it and said “leave it”.. I have to run, so this is short. But the original was short too, and it would have taken her a while to write these words in broken English anyway..

I rather liked the failing in the grammar department – showing the foreigness. A tad less sinister than RMVs, with all the sharing. I didn’t really like his anyway.

I got stuck on the first ‘say’ and thought to myself Elsha??? I read that sentence about 3 times cuz i didn’t think u’d make that error and it had to mean something else. Then I continued and found a gold mind of errors. LOVE IT! way to put this in character.

I really love how you decided to keep her language rough. It’s a bold decision that really works, and something that makes this challenge in general really shine.

I hope, at least, that she doesn’t have a Russian accent. But not all things I hope come true.