Comments on The bloodened world by H.S. Wift

H.S. Wift

Ok, when the judging happens for the short bit, it was originally; My world; 1/3 dirt and 2/3 water. It was TOO short
- Posted almost 10 years ago.
peritales

Blood is better than water. Adds to the icky factor.
- Posted almost 10 years ago.
BegoniaRob

Isn’t this on the UFC training diet?
- Posted almost 10 years ago.
Concerned Reader

This sounds more like the start to a fantasy adventure wartime novel. In the next scene, it follows HEROMAN as he rides a horse across a blood soaked field, which is then raked by the boiling bile of ten thousand dragons.
- Posted almost 10 years ago.
H.S. Wift

I was thinking more sci-fi…
- Posted almost 10 years ago.
Mostly Harmless

Can be looked at from a horror or an action standpoint – either way it’s intriguing, if not totally spine-chilling… MH :)
- Posted almost 10 years ago.
Mr.Gabriel

Is it just me or is the semicolon unnecessary?

It’s more appropriate with a comma.
- Posted almost 10 years ago.
Marli

Very revealing for the author. mmm. ha,ha.
- Posted almost 10 years ago.