Comments on Election Day by Violet Turner

Mr.Gabriel

Awe, that’s cute! She ends up with Tim.

Though a suggestion, when she says “ok” I’m pretty sure it should either be, “OK” or “Okay”
- Posted almost 10 years ago.
- 4 out of 5
Violet Turner

Thanks, I edited.
- Posted almost 10 years ago.
H.S. Wift

Ive never been so sure about OKs
- Posted almost 10 years ago.
Wednesday [PJ] ((LoA))

I always write ‘okay’, even in texts.
I love this. Nice progression from childhood dreams to adult settlings.
- Posted almost 10 years ago.
LMR

I always write out “okay” as well, but “OK” is fine and dandy.

I like how quiet and unassuming this is. The last sentence wraps everything up nicely.
- Posted almost 10 years ago.
- 4 out of 5
emcogNEATO!

I love how this story is both complete and unfinished. Great response to the challenge.
- Posted almost 10 years ago.
- 5 out of 5
Gradual Uprising {LoA}

GOOD JOB!!! I love seeing your character (and mine) in our future setting.
- Posted almost 10 years ago.