Comments on A creepy breakfast by BegoniaRob

Mostly Harmless

Just gross.

I mean ‘curdled pus’? That phrase should be banned for sheer horrendousness. A true bit of creativity here, well done – MH :)
- Posted almost 10 years ago.
- 4 out of 5
emcogNEATO!

Gross! But good job.
- Posted almost 10 years ago.
- 5 out of 5
Paige Elizabeth

Want to leave a comment but can’t stop gagging.
- Posted almost 10 years ago.
- 5 out of 5
Alice Mary

Even in one tiny sentenced I was surprised by the little twisty last bit. Good work.
- Posted almost 10 years ago.
- 4 out of 5
Mr.Gabriel

Ew. Just… ew.
- Posted almost 10 years ago.
The Third Robot

That granted me a shudder. Well done. Although I think maybe the last bit could have been a little more effective.
- Posted almost 10 years ago.
- 4 out of 5
MadAsAHatter

I am both disgusted and intrigued. I think you found the right balance between gross and thrilling. Nice.
- Posted almost 10 years ago.