These stories are near-impossible to make read seamlessly, and the titles do make your character’s dialogue a bit verbose, but it’s a decent entry with an interesting plot beginning and hints of back story tying it all together…

Not sure whether it passes the standalone challenge, but nevertheless, well done – MH :)

aww I like it! Especially “I kicked a boy once to save myself”. For me that really really works, I can picture the speaker perfectly. I think it comes together real well. thumbs up

With a few of these I really have to wonder if I’d have picked out the songs if they weren’t bold/italic. I love their dynamic though. Incidentally, I also love your handle!