Comments on Gratitude by DPoem

Mostly Harmless

This is really good.

I think, actually, my favourite in the competition, for having the courage to leave so much unsaid, but creating the most (potentially) brilliant villain…

So simple as well – not a single adjective, but throws up a plethora of images – I’m stunned.

Welcome to Ficly – you could turn out to be quite the writer! MH :)
- Posted almost 10 years ago.
- 5 out of 5
Wednesday [PJ] ((LoA))

Brilliant. I’m scared already. Welcome to Ficly!
- Posted almost 10 years ago.
- 5 out of 5
oldgraymare

chillz :S
- Posted almost 10 years ago.
Lighty

Terrifying, but not graphic at all! Impressive in itself, but so compact and, leaving so much to the imagination. The more I think about it, the more creepy the sentence becomes. Looking forward to seeing more of your work.
- Posted almost 10 years ago.
Silven

Fantastic! Welcome to Ficly.

You’ve nailed what I think this challenge is all about.
- Posted almost 10 years ago.
- 5 out of 5
DPoem

Thanks for the warm welcome everyone. Glad you enjoyed this.
- Posted almost 10 years ago.
Alice Mary

eeeuurgh! I like this, very creepy… actually chilling – and says everything it needs to!
- Posted almost 10 years ago.
- 5 out of 5
Marli

You should be writing for “Creepy tales”. Horrible. Welcome to ficly DPoem.
- Posted almost 10 years ago.
- 5 out of 5
Paige Elizabeth

Excellent character development in so few words.

Well done!
- Posted almost 10 years ago.
- 5 out of 5
Stovohobo

This is my favorite so far. Ambiguity is really what makes horror for me, not blood and guts, and this hints at a much broader scenario and villain. And everyone likes a good villain.
- Posted almost 10 years ago.
- 4 out of 5
THX 0477

Lots of scary possibilities, and I like the potential level of psychological twistedness possible here in this set up.
- Posted almost 10 years ago.