ha, so it was Dean in your story! the psycho..
:)
See? now this is what ficly SHOULD be. Way to play.

The storyline is a bit violent for it to be in general stories though Chris. We generally pop a mature tag on these but you probably wouldn’t be aware of this as yet.
Never mind just a routine you need to take under your wing when writing stories that may be risky when viewed by young readers. Thanks for your ficly and time.