The sense of horror almost builds in this one, which is a tough act considering it’s only a sentence long! Good work – MH :)
The sense of horror almost builds in this one, which is a tough act considering it’s only a sentence long!
Good work – MH :)
Agree with M.H. good sentence structure and will read more of your work.
Mostly Harmless 
Marli Mostly Harmless Marli