There is a lot of mystery involved here. Which is good but I think that you took it over the top when you brought up environmental stuff. I think that it could make a good story, but it was unnecessary here.

Over than that, I enjoy.

I just meant that as an emotionally-charged retort, not really as any moral or anything. I’ll fix it though.

Didn’t see the stuff Robot mentioned, as I assume you took it out. I really liked it how it is now, with lots of mystery as to what she is doing and why. At first I thought euthanasia, but with the screws and tape it sounds more like ‘Hostel’ or some sort of bodged together execution for crimes against humanity. Could got lots of ways, but still packs a lot of emotional conflict and turmoil for the character.

this is dark, yeah, what’s with the screws? ew. I knew she was going to kill him, but I didn’t expect screws and duct tape. she is not really doctor is she? psycho..

Nice and creepy! I dig the twist ending.