Oh, fantastic. I want to know where this is going… shall read on! One thing, in the fourth paragraph I think you mean ‘performed’. I’m confused as to why they’re getting married yet he is still in class, unless he’s a teacher, and the blacks? Oh, so many questions to be answered!
Aside from that, I loved the superstitious element, the idea that your wedding – right down to what you wear – effects your marriage. Beautifully written.
Wednesday [PJ] ((LoA))
Mr.Gabriel
H.S. Wift