Only one correction in the penultimate paragraph: I think you mean ‘the romantic in me’ rather than ‘the romantic in my’. I love that last paragraph of love lost for ignorance.
The romantic in my finally Shouldn’t it be in me? Other than that, EXCELLENT. Wow, great way to end it. I’m secretly glad they didn’t get back together.
The romantic in my finally Shouldn’t it be in me?
Other than that, EXCELLENT. Wow, great way to end it. I’m secretly glad they didn’t get back together.
I loved it, a great story from the off.
Ah, thank you for that edit, and the comments!
bam. 5.
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