Superb plot build-up. A bit Joyce-ian in the style and I love the quick flashes of plotline. I think you meant ‘is’ rather than ‘was’ in the first line, or you’re mixing tenses in a strange way.
Superb plot build-up. A bit Joyce-ian in the style and I love the quick flashes of plotline.
I think you meant ‘is’ rather than ‘was’ in the first line, or you’re mixing tenses in a strange way.
Wednesday [PJ] ((LoA)) Wednesday [PJ] ((LoA))