This is quite horrifying, and might need more a warning than just MATURE. I know most people aren’t going to want to click a story and accidentally read about a father attempting to rape and assault his child, even if it’s only implied.

Also, there are more ways that a child can have contracted an STI. Some of them are passed on from the parents, as I understand it. I’m fairly certain that what this father plans on doing will result in more death and less VD. Not to mention arrest and probable execution.

Not necessarily, though, and if I win, and Joy gets an STI, then I’ll explain it.

WOW! haha well actually the challenge wasn’t supposed to be the moment when they could get it, but I think this makes it much more interesting. From now on the entries must be about that moment. Last line chilled me to the core.

Very hard to review this, because although the emotions it generates are strong, and that was clearly the intent of the piece… I just found it very uncomfortable as it went on – chilling, but borderline offensive.

I don’t know if it was wise to ask writers to tell the story of how a baby got an STI.

Well-written, but too painful for me to have enjoyed. MH.

I would have to agree with MH. There’s really no way for me to rate this.

I love that comment coming from CR; hilarious. Concerned reader saying it’s too painful to rate. Wow, you are concerned.

Very. If a new user where to stumble across this, they’d be mighty suspect of the content on ficly.

This story somehow is able to utilize more than five taboos:
-Rape
-Child Abuse
-Abusive parents
-incest
-assault
-STI’s

for one thing, in ths challenge, STIs aren’t taboo. It’s called VD is for everybody. And rape is a kind of assault.