Very sad and tragic, especially all the emotions swirling around, from the loss to the love and from the grief and resentment. Tortured little kid. I’m on the fence about the broken English. it made for a harder read, but I can totally see what you were going for
i read this one before the other one with the same character so i thought the main character was a native american at first….i know i’m not all there huh? it was good and might have teared me up had i not been thinking it was a funny name for an indian but then i thought maybe they were innuits…i am even sober and i got that cornfused that quick…..maybe i need a martini to read these, yep that is what was missing. good story elsha sorry for gettin corn-fused
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