This is a very sweet story. I like how you have set it into the future. very effective. Look at the sentence beginning We, being short…. I think there are some words missing.
This is a very sweet story. I like how you have set it into the future. very effective.
Look at the sentence beginning We, being short…. I think there are some words missing.
Corrected! Because I can’t stand leaving it there.
Nice story. My sister just introduced me to Owl City. (She’s a big Death Cab for Cutie fan, and they’re similar). Good stuff!
I always listen to “Fireflies” by them before I go to bed because I’m just weird like that :) This was a very sweet story. I really liked the last line.
I always listen to “Fireflies” by them before I go to bed because I’m just weird like that :)
This was a very sweet story. I really liked the last line.
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